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The Premise

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Prompt:

Write a short story about a monster that attacks humanity and then disappears. The world unites in peace knowing it must pool resources and build a common defence in the event the monster returns. When it does, facing down the huge modern arsenal of modern human development, it dies almost immediately to a couple shots from a mid-tier weapon. The world is in shock, and now we don't know what to do with our uniting threat gone.

The monster arrived on a Tuesday, somewhere between an earthquake and a sunrise.

It stepped out of the Pacific like it had been there forever, like the ocean had been a coat it finally shrugged off. Every camera pointed at it failed for the first six seconds-static, vertical lines, corrupted frames-as if reality needed a moment to rewrite itself around something that big.

No one agreed on the exact height. Some said it scraped the clouds, others that it merely dwarfed skyscrapers. The numbers didn't matter. What mattered were the first three things it did:

  1. It walked through a container port on the west coast and turned cranes into crumpled wire.
  2. It screamed, but the recording microphones heard it as silence followed by total channel failure.
  3. It ignored everything we threw at it.

The jets came first, on reflex. Missiles tracked, struck, blossomed in perfect boiling spheres of fire. When the smoke cleared, the monster was still walking, dark hide glowing faintly, as if the explosions had been nothing more than a flash photograph.

Tanks fired. Artillery. Someone tried a bunker-buster. The world watched live as impact after impact stitched the landscape, and the thing just... kept going, shoulders rolling, claws dragging deep scars in the ground.

We lost a city that day. The monster didn't seem particularly angry; it was just moving. Buildings toppled by accident, bridges torn simply because they were in its way. A million people died, and it never once appeared to notice them.

Then, in the middle of the night, halfway through a second continent, it stopped.

It raised its head, turned slowly, as though listening to something only it could hear. It knelt, the ground shuddering. It curled its impossible limbs in, folded in on itself like collapsing scaffolding, and then-

It was gone.

No explosion. No portal. No dig-out crater. Where thousands of tons of nightmare had stood, there was an impression in the soil and a kind of burnt-shadow outline on the air that drifted away when the wind picked up.

We called it The First Passing.

In the months that followed, two things happened faster than anyone thought possible.

First: nobody fought.

Conflicts that had simmered for decades shifted overnight. Old enemies signed "temporary" ceasefires that became "indefinite strategic cooperation." The videos of the monster walking through steel and concrete without slowing down played on every screen, every hour, in every language, like a metronome for a new age.

Second: we built.

Of course we did. Turns out, when humanity finally agrees on a single problem, it is terrifyingly efficient at solving it.

Within a year, the U.N. had transformed into the IWC: the Inter-World Council. Nations ceded chunks of sovereignty with a quiet, desperate eagerness. Joint commands, joint budgets, joint labs. Every military procurement pipeline was rerouted through a shared doctrine: planetary defense.

We poured money, talent, and fear into four main pillars:

  1. Orbital shields and kill-sats-not just against each other anymore, but against whatever that thing had been.
  2. Directed-energy weapons-lasers, particle beams, railguns slaved to targeting systems that could track a falling leaf from orbit.
  3. Continental-scale sensor nets-hyperspectral, neutrino, gravitational anomaly detection. If a god sneezed, we wanted to know where it lived.
  4. The Common Arsenal-a distributed network of identical weapons platforms, deployed across the globe, with mirrored command chains so that no single nation could hijack it.

It was messy, because humans are messy. There were fights about who got to host what, who contributed more, who was free-riding. But every argument ended the same way: someone would put the footage on, the silent scream and the city disappearing behind its steps, and everyone would remember why they were there.

Children grew up watching cartoons where heroes from a dozen countries teamed up to fight shadowy beasts. Religious leaders found new parables in unity. Climate conferences suddenly became easier-if we needed the planet to fight a monster, maybe we shouldn't be cooking it.

Somewhere along the way, we started calling the monster The Premise.

As in: the starting assumption. The problem statement. The given.

"The Premise is that we are vulnerable."

"The Premise is that we are small."

"The Premise is that alone, we die."

It reshaped everything. Governance, industry, art. Even love stories started to fold in scenes of couples watching the skies together, hand in hand, wondering if tonight would be the night they needed each other most.

Twenty-three years after The First Passing, the thing came back.

It appeared over the Sahara this time, in a heat shimmer that swelled like a bubble. The world's new eyes picked up strange readings five minutes before manifestation: gravity waves curling wrong, the air ionizing in a perfectly vertical column.

Across the planet, alarms rang in a dozen synchronized tones.

My name is Mara. On that day, I sat in the Western Hemisphere Command Node, buried under a mountain that used to be purely national and was now flagged with the sigil of the IWC: a stylized, many-handed figure reaching up against a dark arc.

I was not a soldier. I wrote software-systems integration, control logic, failover routines. Fifteen years of my life had gone into making sure that, if The Premise ever materialized again, we would answer as one.

When the alert came, my console bloomed with data.

"Manifestation confirmed." The operations chief's voice was flat, almost reverent. "Target matches mass signature of The Premise within acceptable tolerance. Codeword: RETURN."

Around us, the great machine of our united fear came to life.

From orbital platforms to deep-sea launchers, the Common Arsenal spun up. Rail capacitors charged. Reactor output surged. Targeting systems swallowed sensor data and exhaled firing solutions, millions of them, refining, converging.

On the main display, the thing finished coalescing.

It was the same.

Same profile, same silhouette. The same long, jointed limbs and trunk-thick tail, the strange, not-quite-right arrangement of eyes. Scaled up? Down? Hard to tell at planetary scale, but the analysts were already overlaying comparisons, tracing line segments, confirming.

Around the world, people stopped what they were doing and held their breath.

We had waited for this. We had sacrificed for this. Generations had bent their lives around this eventual moment. The monster was back, and this time, humanity was ready.

"Common Arsenal at 94% readiness," someone reported. "Authorization grid is green. Awaiting target behavior."

The thing took one step.

Sand erupted, dunes collapsing like the surface of a drum. Seismic stations registered its footfall on three continents. It opened that impossible mouth.

"Brace for sonic event," the chief said.

The monster screamed.

The sound came through every channel this time, a layered, shuddering chord that made my teeth ache. Panels flickered, some unshielded equipment popped and died, but the core systems-our systems-held.

"Acoustics within predictive models," a tech shouted. "No systemic failures."

The scream ended.

The monster lifted its foot to take a second step.

"Commander?" the chief said. "Standing by for engagement order."

The Commander of the Inter-World Council's Defense Arm was a woman from what used to be three different countries. She had lost her brother in The First Passing. She stared at the monster for one beat, two.

"Engage," she said. "Tiered response. Start with Tier Three. Prove the doctrine."

A ripple of acknowledgments.

Tier Three was… modest, relatively speaking. Not the orbital spears. Not the planet-cracking stuff that we pretended we didn't have. Tier Three was the workhorse layer: railguns, mid-range particle beams, hypersonic kinetic rods-things we could afford to fire and refire.

I watched as the targeting overlays blossomed around the monster, then crystallized. Firing solutions locked.

The first shot came from a rail battery in what used to be central Asia.

On the screen, it was just a line-a white streak from nowhere, intercepting the monster's front leg at knee height. There was no explosion, just a sudden, violent subtraction: a chunk of its limb was gone, vaporized and scattered across kilometers.

The monster staggered.

Now, if you'd asked any of us beforehand, we would have expected that. Hoped for it, at least. We'd modeled penetration. We'd simulated displacement. We had entire academic fields built around "applied Premise lethality studies."

Still, in that room, every person sucked in a breath.

"Reacquiring," someone murmured. "Damage assessment-wait, what?"

The second shot took the thing in the chest. Another battery, another nation. Tier Three again. Mid-range, not the flagship caliber. We were still, as the Commander had said, proving doctrine.

On the display, the impact was almost anticlimactic: a tiny flash, then a circular void punched cleanly through its torso. For a moment, you could see daylight on the far side.

The monster froze.

Its scream cut off mid-inhale. Its limbs twitched, once, twice, as if trying to remember how to move. A strange, shimmering distortion blossomed around its wounds, like the air was trying to hold its shape together and failing.

"Commander, energy flux-" started one analyst.

The monster collapsed.

It did not thrash. It did not roar a final curse. It simply folded, the way a dead tree might if you cut it precisely at the right points, and then hit the desert with a thunder that rolled across continents.

Vitals: zero. Mass dispersion patterns: terminal. Residual anomaly: decaying.

Total time from first shot to complete incapacitation: 4.7 seconds.

No Tier Four. No orbital kill-strikes. No desperate last stand.

Just two well-placed shots from a mid-tier layer of a system that, in retrospect, had been designed with the fervor of overcompensation.

"Confirm," the Commander said. Her voice was carefully, painfully neutral. "We have neutralization?"

"Yes," came a dozen voices at once.

Silence descended on the room. On the world.

For a long moment, all of humanity existed in a strange, echoing space: a future we had trained for, feared, built toward, now intersecting with a reality that felt… off by several orders of magnitude.

We had braced ourselves to fight a god and discovered we'd brought a gun to a fistfight.

Somewhere, the feed from a civilian news channel cut to a pundit who whispered, "Is that it?" before realizing the mic was live.

The question spread like a virus.

Is that it?

What do you do when your unifying existential threat turns out to be, in the end, a solvable engineering problem?

In the days that followed, the world did not erupt into celebration.

Oh, there were official ceremonies. Speeches about bravery and vigilance. There were medals pinned on the people who had authorized and executed the shots (they tried to pin one on me; I refused, because my code did not care where it sent the targeting vectors).

But underneath the pomp there was… disorientation.

The Premise had anchored us for a generation. It had justified sacrifices, restructured economies, reshaped identities. Removing it so abruptly revealed that much of our newfound harmony had grown around a negative space: not "we are one," but "we are one against that."

Now, the "against that" was a smoking crater in the desert.

In the Council, arguments resumed-not about monster contingency, but about resource allocations, cultural protections, local autonomy. Old grievances surfaced, freshly painted with new terminology.

In neighborhoods once framed by propaganda posters of a silhouetted beast looming over a united globe, artists started painting over the monster, leaving only the people beneath it.

In my own life, the change was quieter.

A week after the second Passing, I stood on a ridge overlooking the mountain that housed our Command Node. The air was crisp, the sky violently blue. My colleague Amir stood beside me, hands jammed in his jacket pockets.

"They're talking about de-escalation," he said.

"Of the Arsenal?" I asked.

"Yeah. Ramping down Tier Six and above. Converting some platforms to civilian use. Food production, weather control, that kind of thing. People are asking if we still need this much teeth."

I watched a contrail slowly cross the sky, a thin white line against the blue.

"Do we?" I asked.

Amir shrugged. "We just killed the worst thing we've ever seen with Tier Three. Twice. Either we're massively overprepared, or that wasn't the worst thing we'll ever see."

"Comforting," I said dryly.

He laughed, then turned serious. "You know what scares me?"

"What?"

"The fact that people already look… disappointed. We built a life around being in danger. Now that the danger's gone, nobody knows what we're for. You can feel it in the air, like static."

He was right. Even in my own chest, under the relief, there was a hollow, queasy sensation.

I had given fifteen years to this machine, precisely because it was about survival. That clarity had been intoxicating: the equation was simple-if we fail, everyone dies. There was no moral calculus more straightforward than that.

Now?

If we succeed, everyone… lives. Together. With all the complexity that implies.

"What if," I said slowly, "we took The Premise literally."

Amir frowned. "Which part?"

"That we are vulnerable. That alone, we die. Maybe the monster was never the real Premise; maybe it was a very loud reminder. We unified vertically-through fear, through command structures, through a shared enemy. What if the next step is unifying horizontally? Through need. Through choice."

He gave me a sidelong look. "Spoken like someone who's going to get dragged into governance."

"God forbid," I said.

We stood in silence for a while.

Finally, I added, "There's a third option, you know."

"For what?"

"Why we still need an Arsenal. Either that wasn't the worst thing we'll ever see… or we weren't meant to kill it that easily."

He blinked. "Meaning?"

"Meaning: what if this was the test of whether we could set aside our own self-destruction long enough to reach this point. And now that we have… what if something is going to notice."

He made a face. "You've been reading too many speculative memos."

"Probably," I said. "But tell me you haven't thought it."

He didn't answer.

Below us, the mountain hummed faintly with the power of a thousand waiting weapons, most of which would probably never fire in anger.

For the first time, I realized I felt something I hadn't allowed myself in decades:

Boredom. Aimlessness. The sense that my skills, once turned like a spearhead against a single nightmare, might now have to grapple with a thousand softer, messier problems: inequality, reconstruction, culture, meaning.

Problems you can't solve with a perfectly aimed railgun.

"Maybe that's the real shock," I said. "Not that the monster died so easily. That we don't know how to live without it."

Amir sighed. "So what do we do?"

I thought of the code I'd written-logic for distributing authority, for merging inputs, for failing gracefully when a single node went dark. Systems that assumed no one could be trusted with full control, but everyone could be trusted with a piece.

Maybe those systems were good for more than killing giants.

"We repurpose," I said. "We take the engine we built to survive The Premise and point it at everything else. Hunger. Disease. Climate. The stuff we ignored because we were so busy being afraid."

"And if another monster comes?" he asked.

I looked up at the empty sky, now bare of anything but clouds and contrails.

"Then Tier Three can handle it," I said. "We've proved that. Maybe the real question now isn't how do we survive them, but how do we deserve to."

He turned that over, then gave me a crooked smile. "That sounds like a nightmare of a requirements document."

"Yeah," I said, feeling something stir in my chest that wasn't fear. "But at least this time, it's our own."